by Bloomed Rose Apr 10, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Clouds go on, each one different from the previous or next, just like the days of our own lives. They go on one by one, then they are gone, just like events of the past, whether happy, or sad. Then one day I was staring up at the sky, and I found the perfect cloud for me and me only. It looked like a heart, and I was just too lazy to get up and get my camera, so I let it drift on by. This is just like love, you know that there's just got to be someone out there that is perfect for you, just like that cloud. But it will slip away if you are just too lazy to get up and tell them. Then again, clouds can be like friends, always there for you when you need them. When I am sad, the clouds turn dark and full or pouring rain, when I am happy, they part to let the bright shining sun set it's radiant beams on my face. Clouds can be like a lot of things, or just something special themselves. And that's the beauty of it all. They are. . . well . . . .clouds. |
by Sean Allen
That was very fun and interesting. Good prose piece on your feelings on clouds. |
Once again, FABULOUS!!! Keep it up. I definately agree, clouds rock. Write another! |
by Just Lisa
Hey! I liked this poem because I can kinda relate! I know the feeling! Except for me, I like the stars! They're beautiful! Awesome poem though . . . It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . . |