I'll hurt whoever hurts my friend,
This line was the only problem. Well not really. You say friend but then switch to you. I know you need it for the rhyme so try:
I'll hurt whoever hurts you my friend,
Does that work to you? :s
Otherwise one of the better friendship poems I've read. I love the emotions.

I really liked this. You expressed your feelings towards your friends well. great job! 5/5*

Wow i adore this poem, it's one of the better friendship poems like kaylee said.god job =) 5/5

~StefQ

This poem is amazing. such a strong poem. possibly one of the best friendship ones ive read! its really touching. and your friends would be blown away for you to write this. its an amazing write.

Kat

Thats sweet and well written nice job

Aww really sweet, spesh the last stanzy, allie i think should be ally though
Nice stuff, keep writing