You're Like Suicide

by Bridgette   Apr 10, 2006


Your sick little game
That I refuse to play
Threatening suicide
Just to get your way

Your meaningless words
Have somehow empowered me
I try to hide it all
But still everyone can see

You cannot break me
For I'm already broken
My crushed little heart
Is now your happiness token

But you can tell everyone
That I've done wrong
That its all my fault
That I'm now alone

You can laugh when I fall
And kick me when I'm down
You'll never be happy
Until I'm not around

Blocking you out
Just makes you more alive
Shortening my life
You're just like sweet suicide.

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  • 18 years ago

    by rachael

    Wow.. ur writing is amazing. all ur poems are so emotionally powerful. i love them. this one's my favorite. i like the metaphor and the message..
    everything will be okay...:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Its ok hunn..
    You will make it through all of this. All you have to do is stay strong. You are an excellent writer. I hope you know that. It is the truth!!!!!!

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very powerful and expressive peice, tells the story well and maitains interest well

    55/

  • 18 years ago

    by LiL K

    This poem is really powerful..a lot of people will threaten to kill themselves to either scare someone n make them feel bad or to get their way...I know of a few people myself.

    "You cannot break me
    For I'm already broken
    My crushed little heart
    Is now your happiness token"

    ....I love this stanza! Keep it up! 5/5

    ♥ Kelly

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    So sad! Great flow, great rhymes, I reall felt your emotion. Also - it's a really imagintaive idea, describing a person as suicide.

    Peace. [Sole]

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