You've captured the "freedom of the ride" beautifully. Nice write. |
by Melissa
This is awesome, Bill! Glad you got your bike, sounds like your having a blast.. Love the second stanza and what a perfect ending! Good to see your writing again. ;o) |
by Simon Hayes
Superb! My friend, you've conveyed your wild times incredibly well. I enjoyed the read. Kinda made me want to be there :) |
by PS
Amazing. fills me with childhood memories cuz i dont ride a bike too often. amazing. i love the dragon imagery. nice job! |
by eric
Hahaha thats awsome 5/5 :D good job love the second stanza |
by Natalie84
OK don't ask me why but this reminded me of Shrek...LMAO I DID watch it last night so maybe that's why. |
by Natalie84
Oh and YES....I LOVE the title!!!!!!!! Excellent choice!!!!! |