Beautiful! So loving and tender. A thorough love poem, capturing so much warmth!

Winds are blowing like my mind
Sweeping away the debris of my life
Walls and barriers collecting it for later
Holding all the dirt and negativity at bay
Dancing across my inner vision flittering away

GREAT STANZA! and what a way to start off this poem! Truly breath taking you did a Fantastic job with this piece Bill and it was again a pleasure to read! I just loved that stanza though I'm stuck on it because you used imagery great and my fave poems are ones that leave me with a picture in my head!
Chelsey-Lynn

Wow thats beautiful!!!. great jpb i love it...how i wish i could write like that!!! 5/5!

Bill
Beautiful poem....You are gifted my friend....truly a great write.

love Ann

WOW another amazing masterpiece...great job 5/5..

Another one of your exquisite works of poetry, truly inspiring. This poem reminds me of the quote, "Love is like the wind. You can't see it, but you can feel it." Beautifully penned.

It had my attention from the very first word.Simply beautiful, Bill! So warmly exquisite!

WOW Bill- i've haven't read your poetry in a very long time- you probably don't remember me but i'm a big fan :) back to your splendid, striking and copacetic work, i loved it and i think the last line really ecompassed the whole poem and what it is about, the heights love can take those in love. I loved the diction and flow, the way you structured each stanza ending in ryhming couplets really helped helped keep a rythm and the imagery is brilliant. Take care XxX