by Cody
Life is loss and life is pain and it is what we must go through it makes you wonder if it is even worth it |
by azlan26
Just a suggestion would the last line sound better as |
by PS
Sad yet so true. great job. unique style. |
by Tara Kay
Yeah, thats true and the poem was good, its sad but liflike. well done |
by Mark
I liked the style you used in this poem.. the way you answered the questions with answers.. |
I read your poem in that contest thingy....i really think u should have won..this poem is awsome...not only does it explain life..but its so creative..the second half relates exactly to the forst half for every line in the stanza..thats really cool how u did that...i liked it alot!!!!..best poem ive read in a while...keep it up 5/5!! |