Comments : X What Is Life?

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Life is loss and life is pain and it is what we must go through it makes you wonder if it is even worth it

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Just a suggestion would the last line sound better as
    "losing someone you'll always love"
    i dno
    it just killed the flow a bit
    apart from that...
    great poem
    again
    ...

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Sad yet so true. great job. unique style.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yeah, thats true and the poem was good, its sad but liflike. well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    I liked the style you used in this poem.. the way you answered the questions with answers..

    It's kinda sad they're all depressing.. but hey. That's what life is.. it's depressing. What can we really do?

  • 18 years ago

    by David Marshall

    I read your poem in that contest thingy....i really think u should have won..this poem is awsome...not only does it explain life..but its so creative..the second half relates exactly to the forst half for every line in the stanza..thats really cool how u did that...i liked it alot!!!!..best poem ive read in a while...keep it up 5/5!!