"As a free spirit,
You guide me around,
You have tought me,
And through out, I have found.

You are my earth, my spirit,
My guide that will take me places,
To see many people as I travel by,
To see the look, upon peoples faces.

You can take me and show me the way,
To show me how to live in this world,
I shall learn by your ways,"

Reading ^those^ lines, i expected it to be happy and inspirational. Well, that's definitely not how it turned out. =/ ....

This was a good poem, and i'm sure many people can relate. The only thing i didn't really like was the brick being hirled part. I didn't think it fit very well...but other than that, i really like it.

And, i want to help you. God, do i want to help you...i want you to be happy! But i don't think i'm doing any good, am i? Bleh, i'll talk to you later tonight. Hopefully i'll still be on the pc... i have to stay up late and do some homework.

I love you, Mark.

I liked it, It was different in most poems start sad end happy :P
Lol, Britt haas said it all, great poem man!.x

Mark you NAUGHTY boy. Tut tut ;d Ask Kristen for what? Copies of the conversation? :]x

To not be seen, and away from everyone,
As I try to find who I might be,
I think about it all.. love life,
All those things, people can't see.

^^^ amazing lines!!!! they are sooo true!!!
great poem btw hun!!
hope to speak to you soon
love jess xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Hey really good poem well written

i added u on msn if thats ok lol

talk to u soon

keep up the good work

Very good poem. Keep it up man.

Not a bad poem, you have some inviting thoughts expressed in it, however several words were spelt wrong, including tought, hirled and controll. Explore your use of vocabulary and rhyming also and never fear experimenting. Keep working at it!!

Good poem again! sorry if i'm going a little comment-crazy, but i have nothing to doooo and ur a good poet! okay bye.

5/5.

OMG!! i love this one its the best ive read so far i love it its adorable full of meaning and im right u do have your own fan club every one adores your poems over the 3 months youve been banned looks like every one was voteing for YOU!! well sure will vote for you lol xoxroxyxox