Comments : Sad City

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Thuis peice is very well written, the flow is good and the content full of truth and very well expressed.

    5/5

    (you may want to edit a few of the words which have gone like this: "donâ??t" though)

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Amazing write!
    alot of description which is good, you did say "old man" alot, which is my only negative thing to say.

    you really did a good job on this poem