This poem is really good. it really makes you think...the last line really brings everything together. great write. 5/5*

The flow was a bit rocky for me hunni, but I can't argue the idea at all. You message/theme about the validity of the classification of normal was a very true statement and I enjoyed how you went into detail about the different fields and what the would be if they were "normal." I great poem overall.

-Tainted Mikochan

This is good. && A good question too, "what is normal" I really liked this one, Mainly cause it actually makes the reader think about it. Anywho 5/5

luv natalie x-x

This is incredible. i love your style and flow, it worked really well with your concept. i love this poem. it's just so true and i found it very touching.

great, great job bub,

take care - hannah

Love the poem, as always the topic makes you think, and draws emotoins. All though out it I was thinking. That's not normal. If it was we'd never want more. Everyone has to go through there own ups and downs... You were talking about the average family in a wealthy country right?

Normal is a fantasy.

So true. theres no such thing as "normal" everyone has problems, some just are worse off than others is all

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The poem says it all

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The poem says it all

That was an amazing poem! because in the dictionary the word normal is defined as A "perfect" life or person and no one is "perfect" except the lord (if you believe in him)