by Kaylee
The rhyming feels a bit forced and this kind of contrdicts itself. You say it doesn't matter as you are you but earlier it says it doesn't matter as you're not cheesey. Well what if the person was? Just tweak here and there. The repetition of the first half of the lines were good though. |
by Bridgette
I really like the meaning of this poem, although the flow was a bit off on a couple lines, you did a really great job for a repetition poem. It was nicely done. Great job! 5/5* |
This poem was okay!! it wasnt one of the best poems you have written!! I agree with the others the ryhming seemed forced and a couple lines didnt really make sense!!! |