The poem was very sad and full of emotions. But it still was a very well written poem w/o a doubt! ^_^

Hey,
I thought that the beginning of the poem was kind of weak but it became stronger at the end of the poem, the rhyming is a bit forced, and also the flow is not completely perfect, so I will have to give you 4/5
kisses Stephanie

It's sad but very good i mean really good