WHY DID YOU MAKE ME LOVE YOU?

by Goth marionette   Apr 10, 2006


Boy:Leave me,I don't love you anymore

Girl:I still love you and need you in my life

Boy:Don't be tedious,I hate you

Girl:Did you forget our days together?

Boy:They finished and died

Girl:And your promises,where did they go?

Boy:I was blind when I chose you

Girl:I didn't do anything bad to you

Boy:You are the worst thing happened in my life

Girl:I cannot believe myself

Boy:Then wake yourself up,we are not for each other

Girl:Try to stay and I am ready to give you my life

Boy:I don't need it and I got to go..bye

Girl:I whispered "Don't go,I am bleeding from inside"

The girl went home crying and stayed alone all the night writing a note..

Then on the second day in the morning,she kissed her parents,held them tight and said good-bye

She went out alone to the house of her lover and in front of the door

She cut her wrist..and fell on the floor scraping the wall

But inside:
The boy and his new girl friend..spending fine time..

and suddenly he heard a strange sound out

He opened the door..he found her body on the floor

Blood everywhere..his girl ranaway quickly leaving him alone

He came close to her..and found in her hand a paper..she wrote just 7 words on it

"WHY DID YOU MAKE ME LOVE YOU?"
The boy cried and screamed from pain.."get up please"..don't die..

Forgive me,you were the best thing happened in my life..he came in and brought a knife cutting his wrist writing
"AS I LOVED YOU MORE"..

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Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Oh. Shit. man. this was just amazing... Im like speechless. WOW!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    This was such a unique poem i loved how you went back and forth between the guy and girl it added your own twist to the form of the poem
    the ending was sad but so realistic i mean this could happen so much these days
    great job! 5/5 : )

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    I really enjoyed reading it..a romantic tragedy i see..keep it up ya shimo ;)..stupid boys :S..

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I love this poem the drama the intensity i love it perfect! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Wow.. that was amazing.
    Now that is deep love. Can't discribe what I feel actually.. a shock, sadness, it's very touching..
    Very well done!
    5/5
    Take care