And why do I have to cry
Why does every beat of my heart
Make me want to die
Each beat is filled with sorrow
Each beat is filled with pain
If my heart doesn't stop
Beating soon I swear I'll go insane
One slash
Two slash
Oh god please stop the pain
One slash
Two slash
The beating's driving me insane
And yet alive I continue to remain

that was an awesome part!!! this is one of my fav poems of urs...it keeps the reader awake, alert, and most of all, interested....i absolutely adored it....grrt plot and the slash effect was creative and effective. grrt job once again...
love ya lots,
sore