by Marissa Apr 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I want to run away, |
Thsi si good. the rhetorcal questions reall make you think and add depth to the peice and the structure is good too. the flow is smooth and the rhymes do not sem too forced (other than prehapce the one in the final stanza) |
Good poem! its so sad though... |