Comments : PAIN INSIDE

  • 18 years ago

    by StarStrukFiona

    Good poem! its so sad though...
    :) b happier (not that i'm one to speak!)

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Thsi si good. the rhetorcal questions reall make you think and add depth to the peice and the structure is good too. the flow is smooth and the rhymes do not sem too forced (other than prehapce the one in the final stanza)

    5/5