You cannot save me now

by McGeek   Apr 10, 2006


There once was a girl
Who hated this world
She lived in Black and White
She hated her life
So she pulled out her knife
Knowing her parents would fight
She was beaten and abused
She couldn't feel more used
she wanted it all to end
She wrote a note
not giving them hope
She wrote it all in pen
"it was all your fault
You're the adult
You cannot save me now, I'm gone"
She lay there on her bed
Reading it over in her head
While the blood dripped down her palm
She started to go
When the blood could not flow
Then she said her last words out loud
"my broken heart
Was torn apart
I hope you all are proud."

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    Hi Ya,

    So although this is sad its has some beauty to it. Nice to know that we arent going to live forever - forever begins when we die. Really like what you have written here.

    Godbless,
    Sammib

  • 18 years ago

    by FASHIONISTA

    This is a very good poem! It has strong feeling to it, alot. Aw..that's so sad=( Did that actually happen about your parents fighting a stuff=(? You can talk to me anytime you want! BTW thank you for the advice I will try that. And Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems! Cya
    xxx
    *van.e.ssa*
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Shayne

    I really loved this poem so touching

  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    Wow! stunning poem, very dramatic and also sadly very true for some people. Keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Really good. powerfull and clearly written thoughout with a good flow and strong rhthum

    5/5

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