by Momentary Relapse Apr 10, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
With a warcry loud that broke the stone |
by Tripp
I love the message and the word use in this poem...very rich. just try organizing your poems into stanzas according to the rhyme scheme, like in this case, couplets. still, pretty good, and i like how it told a story. keep up the good work |
Your work astounds me |
by PS
Like i said about the other vanquished one applies here. lovely! |