Wow. this is really sad and emotional. you put your heart and soul into it. i really love this stanza:

In sweet memory we bury him
and watch our memories fade
The white will grow dim
and the blacks turn to grays.

Wow, hope it aint true but if it is well im here if u need to talk.

Fantastic peice, the flow is good and the content very well portrayed. the expression powerful and the piece easy to read.

5/5

I think you could have gone more in detail about who the other three were or was there more connection with the fourth person?

It was really sad, and i hope it isn't true, but while seeing being buried is sad why not go more into the life that was once celebrated.