Perfect together,perfect apart

by Sorefromreality   Apr 10, 2006


We were perfect together
so alike and so much fun
no one saw it coming
no one thought our love would be done

we were perfect apart
no more fights
and no more tears
no more sleepless nights

so perfect together
we balanced each other out
we were never questioned
never had any doubts

so perfect apart
we no longer need to lie
all those overused excuses
will no longer fly

we were a match made in heaven
so very perfect together
seemed like a blissful fairytale
that would go on forever

we were so perfect together
but even more perfect apart
i may not admit it but
the end began from the start

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Ugh, im assuming that something happened with you two...that REALLYYYY sucksssss. just try to hold it together. if this love wasnt true, then its gonna fall apart. just remember the good times. great poem nonetheless

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Im sorry to hear that this is how your relationship ended. i know what you are going through, because recently i went through the same thing.that is a great poem. i like how you are perfect together, yet perfect apart. great way to describe some friendships and relationships.mine was just the same. thanks for your comment. il keep the comments coming on yours :)
    love ya lots,
    tammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked the poem from the title..and when i read it..i liked it more..keep shinin..

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    Good, poem ..nice flow.. and I like how u ended it.. gave it a 5.. take Care Sara

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    This is pretty much how my relationship went.....i hate to think that we arent gonna be, but it is our destiny to be apart.......
    much love,
    sore

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