Saintly

by Ben   Apr 10, 2006


He saw the destruction on the telly
and heard the screams on the radio
he knew what he had to do
signing his letter, goodbye my love, shelley

He took to the air in a rigid silver bird
and flew it to where the light of hope was dim
he vowed to give his life, his soul
not to follow the capitalist herd

He landed in the sun drenched lands of aid pleas
and found water was as scarce as the will to go on
he silently muttered a prayer
asking for the lord's help, he was on his knees

He built a well for a night and two days
and never touched what wasn't his deep down in that well
he again prayed for the lords help
but none came, perhaps he was in a daze

He taught god's unforntunate creations his mother tongue
and did so until his throat was hoarse with achievement
he placed his hands together and pleaded for the lords help,
though the words just, in the air, hung

He walked all day to return with a small bounty of food
and handed it around fairly, without any for himself
he lay asleep, in his fatigued ridden state, and for the final time asked the lord to listen
but again the lord ignored the actions of the good

Bring on one angel; bring on ten
for this man, lord, is what a true saint should be, doing; not preaching
but maybe that is why you ignore him so consistently lord
for he be more saintly that you, amen

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  • 18 years ago

    by ..Emma..

    See i disagree with both of you.
    its obvious ben is talented.
    he writes about the important facts.
    he shows how if there is a god where is he? why is there no help by this so called " god "

    Ben has made a poem on what everyone asks themselves " is god real "
    He states his opinon, which is tht he believs he isnt.
    there is nothing to be confused about here.

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    Ben, im not going to lie to you...I thought it was okay...But not that great...I think yo could have made it so much better. Your wording needs some work..But other than that its good...I cant judge on what you wrote about because its yours..But other than your wording, you did a good job:) *Hug*

    ~Always4You~

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~

    Im confuzed? where is he... and why was he there!? im geussing war but im just stupid soo... i have no clue. it seems as if this poem isnt finished. like the chunk was taken out of a really long poem. i do hope ull take this into consideration. Good job Newayz! i enjoyed reading it!

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~

    Im confuzed? where is he... and why was he there!? im geussing war but im just stupid soo... i have no clue. it seems as if this poem isnt finished. like the chunk was taken out of a really long poem. i do hope ull take this into consideration. Good job Newayz! i enjoyed reading it!