by Ben Apr 10, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
He saw the destruction on the telly |
by ..Emma..
See i disagree with both of you. |
by Always4You
Ben, im not going to lie to you...I thought it was okay...But not that great...I think yo could have made it so much better. Your wording needs some work..But other than that its good...I cant judge on what you wrote about because its yours..But other than your wording, you did a good job:) *Hug* |
Im confuzed? where is he... and why was he there!? im geussing war but im just stupid soo... i have no clue. it seems as if this poem isnt finished. like the chunk was taken out of a really long poem. i do hope ull take this into consideration. Good job Newayz! i enjoyed reading it! |
Im confuzed? where is he... and why was he there!? im geussing war but im just stupid soo... i have no clue. it seems as if this poem isnt finished. like the chunk was taken out of a really long poem. i do hope ull take this into consideration. Good job Newayz! i enjoyed reading it! |