Im confuzed? where is he... and why was he there!? im geussing war but im just stupid soo... i have no clue. it seems as if this poem isnt finished. like the chunk was taken out of a really long poem. i do hope ull take this into consideration. Good job Newayz! i enjoyed reading it!

Im confuzed? where is he... and why was he there!? im geussing war but im just stupid soo... i have no clue. it seems as if this poem isnt finished. like the chunk was taken out of a really long poem. i do hope ull take this into consideration. Good job Newayz! i enjoyed reading it!

Ben, im not going to lie to you...I thought it was okay...But not that great...I think yo could have made it so much better. Your wording needs some work..But other than that its good...I cant judge on what you wrote about because its yours..But other than your wording, you did a good job:) *Hug*

~Always4You~

See i disagree with both of you.
its obvious ben is talented.
he writes about the important facts.
he shows how if there is a god where is he? why is there no help by this so called " god "

Ben has made a poem on what everyone asks themselves " is god real "
He states his opinon, which is tht he believs he isnt.
there is nothing to be confused about here.