Any Last wishes

by PS   Apr 11, 2006


I hate you
for what you did to me
cursed me beat me dead
but now its your turn
you won't be missed
any last wishes?

the fires of the inferno
call to you day and night
i hate you for all that you are
and all that you will ever be
so i ask again
any last wishes

you hurt me bad
took away all i had
the hope, dreams
and the Naivity
that made my day
but you'll be gone
and i ask
any last wishes?

its over now
and never again
will i have to feel the pain
you'll be gone
and away in hell
it doesnt matter
if you have a wish
because you dont deserve
an angel to grant it
so goodbye and
dont forget it
my solemn punishment
and the lack of
last wishes.

*they should have a angry poem category*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Good solid structure and wording. Watch out for the parts that say wish and wishes. They should probably be the same thing. Other than that excellent work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I agree with brittany ^^ I think the repetition of 'Any last wish?' or 'Any last wishes?' is important in this poem. Also

    and the naivete

    Is spelt Naivity.

    Other than that - good flow and original structure. Well written.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    Its a great poem. you really put all your emotions in it. but i noticed that you say any last wish at the end of some and then any last wishes at the end of others. it would sound better if they all said any last wishes.

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