Out of Body Experience

Out of body experience

out of sight
out of mind

All the interference

all over my body
all in my mind

Can't resist temptation

can't see what's real
can't help the sadness

Too much frustration

too much to think about
too much on my mind

Seeing lives pass me by

seeing them leave
seeing such pain

Feeling inside me die

feeling the love
feeling the tears

Trying to scream for help

trying to find my way
trying to live my life

Hearing the horrible painful yelp

hearing terrified cries
hearing the sadness disclosed

My mind is out of control

my loved ones leaving
my life growing shorter

This severe pain in my soul

this is misery
this is my daily life

Taking my Independence

taking away my sanity
taking my reasons for living

All in my out of body experience

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