by Dakota Apr 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
All i want |
by Kaila
I liked the message from this poem but the whole like layout and stanza was a little off but otherwise you did a nice job try rhyming a little more the flow will go along a lot better |
Mmm its gotta lot a good quotes try connecting it more though but its still a nice poem 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine |