Give Me A Lift (Etheree)

by Sean Dohr   Apr 11, 2006


Love
So Blind,
Blows My Mind.
What Does She See,
That's So Good In Me?
Now, I've Fallen For Her,
Leaving Our Past In A Blur.
It's The Way She Treats Me So Right,
In Our Phone Conversations At Night,
That Has Made The Bad Times Easy To Bare,
Because At Least Then I Know She Cares.
She's Done Me Wrong Before, But Why?
I Ask God, Head Towards The Sky.
I Beg Him For A Gift,
To Give Me A Lift.
Up From The Street,
Where I Lay
At Her
Feet.

~Falling Into The Same Mess~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Excellent poem. I really liked it, especially the structure of it. I admire your ability to be able to put something like that into words, and in such a way!

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Yet another amazing peice. I loved it. There are many that can relate I'm sure. Awesome Job, Keep it up!

    Peace, Joe

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Wow, I can definatly relate to this, love is such a powerfull thing.. good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Nice structure - it worked well with your poem. You even managed to rhyme it, a hard feat to manage indeed. Well written.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Great write. Perfectly written in Etheree a well structured and laid out. 5/5

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