I love this poem a lot! I love how it goes from 1 word for the first line then two words for the second line and so on...Nice

Great poem keep it up
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Awe this is really cute! keep it up!

Great write. Perfectly written in Etheree a well structured and laid out. 5/5

Nice structure - it worked well with your poem. You even managed to rhyme it, a hard feat to manage indeed. Well written.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow, I can definatly relate to this, love is such a powerfull thing.. good work!

Yet another amazing peice. I loved it. There are many that can relate I'm sure. Awesome Job, Keep it up!

Peace, Joe

Excellent poem. I really liked it, especially the structure of it. I admire your ability to be able to put something like that into words, and in such a way!