Comments : Family

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Woah!
    Thats a very sad poem!!
    But i still loved it!!
    You rhyme very well!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Yours Truely

    The girl in your poem, She appears to have lost her strength... But, Maybe one day, sh'ell have it under control. You're a good poet, And, You can convey "others" emotions quite well...