Wow very good!
I think you should let her read it...if you havent already..It's really good and i think that she'd like to know you feel that way
Great work-xxxx-

Wow..very nice...she needs to know how you really feel so that she can understand you better...nice job...
~Matt~

Wow that was good! you should show this to her if you haven't. nice job though. 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Rly gd poem... but i cant really relate to what u say in the poem, cuz i dont really agree... why should we be what our parents expect us to be? i mean, they could be living in an illusonary world where every single thing is perfect...! someone has to wake them up from their "oh-so perfect" dream and make them face the reality... the truth itself, as much as this may hurt! we are the way we are, and they won't change it. we wont pretend we're perfect just to please them...!
{sorry i wrote such a long comment, but.. i dont know, it just got out...! anyway, excellent poem! congratulations, once more}

Thanks for the comment
i really get what you're saying in this one. i make mum so angry nd i feel so bad that im not like my perfect brother...but you gotta remember that no one's perfect nd your sister or whoever is the perfect one in the family usually has something hidden deep down... dont be the one with the secret!! tell your mum how you feel....

really good poem, tonnes of emotion - loved it

kat - xox