Good use of the repetitive stanza...I think its quite refreshing to see a poem about the Tsunami because sometimes we "forget to remember". This is a very different poem to your usual stuff again...but its good stuff...

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Well ompletely diffo from ur usual, but real spesh...but whats richness got to do with it - wasnt it an underwater volcano that caused it?? Or am i talking crp....

This is great. i love the repeating stanza. its soo beautiful. you captured it wonderfully

The repeative stanza makes the poem stand out, its a good poem, it flows well. keep it up

Absolutly beautifull work! I love the repeated stanza and the flow was great.... sorry you had to take it out of the contest lol.. but I can assure you, it prolly would have gotten in top 3.. Really nice work, keep it up!

Silver seas and oceans deep
A rushing wave, as the innocent sleep
Never to waken, never to see
The water gushing, finally free

I liked the repeated use of this stanza. The images that come to mind are as strong as some of your words.
Another wonderful write 5/5