NO HOPE...

by PURE HEART   Apr 11, 2006


You left me without saying a word,
leaving me with a life so absurd.

I stood so stunned looking at you,
wondering that how did you say so.
Before my silent tears could say something too,
you asked me to leave, you told me to go.

You broke my heart into two,
i always expected this from you.
But i made my mind that as i love you,
one day you will love me too the way i do.

My confidence on my love was stronger than hill,
i believed that you will also love me by your own will.
But i forgot that i loved a heartless stone,
who scattered me, my heart, even my bones.

The feelings you showed me that you care,
now seems to be nothing more than a play.
You hurt me, broke me from deep inside me,
may no one else do to others that way.

Now i have to learn to live alone,
its like spending a life in mourn.
But what else i could wish to do,
there is simply no hope that you will come back too...

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Some nice lines in here, but the mixing up of the rhyme sceme really makes it hard to read and other things as well that just distrupt the flow

  • 18 years ago

    by Leann

    Broken Love. I am trying to write a poem about it now and yours kicked mine right of the water. Incredible and trutfully written.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey thats a very sad one but beautifully expressed and some great examples quoted.

    hope u r feeling fine

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Very heartfelf poem Bharti, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    I stood so stunned looking at you,
    wondering that how did you say so.
    Before my silent tears could say something too,
    you asked me to leave, you told me to go.

    You broke my heart into two,
    i always expected this from you.
    But i made my mind that as i love you,
    one day you will love me too the way i do.

    My confidence on my love was stronger than hill,
    i believed that you will also love me by your own will.
    But i forgot that i loved a heartless stone,
    who scattered me, my heart, even my bones.

    i love thesse lines.they are perfect for a poem like urs. huni dont give up coz theres always hope.......but in a way u shud give up on the idiot who broke ur heart into two coz he does not deserve ur pure hearts love. theres a quote "its beta to lose a lover than to love a loser" always rememba that. ur a talented poet with lots to lookforward to in life so be happy huni :)

    this poem was beautiful jus like you 5/5

    sonam

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