This was pretty good too, Maby if you separated the stanza's, It would be better. But it was still good!

luv natalie x-x

Wow.
You really pulled me in on this one.
I loved it, It shows what thinking can do -_-
Lol. I loved the steady flow and how it all just read out perfectly & twas a really interesting read, made me want more!!

Well done!

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You just definately earned a spot on my favorites list! You are an AMAZING writer...I can't put it into words.....5/5