Awww baby I think you need to write something other than depressing stuff. Or you will get me upset too! Either way, a good lil' write (wish I could write like that) love you lots xoxoxo cint

That Poem had good structure and flow, Short but i guess thats that made it so good, Keep up the good work man

god bless
Colt

OMG it was soo emotional it made me shiver :s but good job ;)

Loved it, 5/5