This poem blew me away! It made me feel as if I were the girl in the poem, and let me tell you that is hard to do. I loved it, from beginning to the end. Excellent job, i want to read more.......

xox tiffany

Have to admit I don't read much Love poetry as I usually find it too personal to the people involved. But I thought the story line of this poem was so unusual I was intrigued. You either have a very intresting life or a vivid imagination. Either way - good job.

A splendid poem, very well written
i love it

I love it!! This poem drew me in!! I couldn't stop reading it!!=) Very well written!!

Hey jackie thanx for the comments,

i really liked the sentiment in this piece, it portrays alot of raw emotion, it kinda reminded me of a first love poem cos u never forget ur first love and rekindeling the flame by meeting would be intense.

A very well written piece which flowed superbly,

Well done.

Gary.

5/5

This poem is beautiful! the emotion was powerful and inspiring. i really enjoyed reading it :)

Ally. x

This has got to be one of my favourite poems. Its so unbelievably sweet yet sad.

You manage to show love in all its beauty, regardless of the pain eveident.

I love the third stanza, you manage to write my feelings comepletely - Me and my boyfriend live in different cities and evertime we meet it's just magic.

"This year we've arranged to meet at the same place
I can't wait to see him, touch his face
My love for him has never dwindled
Just life is cruel and I've been swindled
Our time will come, we'll just have to wait
Leave our future in the hands of fate"
Amen! Just beautiful.

xxx.

WOW...I really like this...It is so good....I gotta save it in my favs....thanks so much for this ........Time will come...xoxoxo

First off...5/5 xD
this poem is really good, its the third of yours ive read and i have to say they keep getting better!
getting ready for the next!

Your poetry m is like your passion, big, great writing, i love your raw sexual honesty xP

AAH BRAVO! I really was smiling the whole time ! GReat poem !

It's always hard when a love comes to an end but none of you ever nearly wanted it too. I like the way you expressed the emotions and feelings, 5/5. Em x

Passionate..nice