by Mezmeryz Apr 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The pain on the skin |
by Lady Nik
Enthralled by the sight |
It was good. it had a good flow to it. you know like it came straight from your heart. And you have amazing work when it is from the heart. I loved it. But the only part that bothered me about it ( and this is just little non-important stuff) the stanzas were all the same amount of lines except two of them. |
"Visions in the darkness |
by Renan
BRILLIANT and amazing wirting! |
by smile
Amazing flow and structure. |