by Bree Apr 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You\'ve changed in so many ways, its hard to explain. you say everyday your love for me grows stronger, how can your love for me grow stronger when your so far away, we fight constantly and we brake up and get back together so tell me again how can your love grow for someone if in some ways you hate me.. |
by Sammib
I see you arent really the poet rhyming type, but are more into putting your feelings down on paper..which is cool.Its good to let thing out and share at the same time. Thank you for practicing the principal of sharing is caring:) |
by Erikah
I HAVE A FRIEND THATS GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING. AND LIKE I TOLD HER; JUST WAIT AWHILE TO SEE WHAT THE FUTURE HOLDS, AND IF YOU STILL LOVE THAT PERSON, DO WHAT YOU FEEL IS RIGHT IN YOUR HEART. bUT I LIKE YOUR POEM. NEXT TIME JUST PUT IT IN STANZAS AND A RHYMING SCHEME. |