by Erikah
I HAVE A FRIEND THATS GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING. AND LIKE I TOLD HER; JUST WAIT AWHILE TO SEE WHAT THE FUTURE HOLDS, AND IF YOU STILL LOVE THAT PERSON, DO WHAT YOU FEEL IS RIGHT IN YOUR HEART. bUT I LIKE YOUR POEM. NEXT TIME JUST PUT IT IN STANZAS AND A RHYMING SCHEME. |
by Sammib
I see you arent really the poet rhyming type, but are more into putting your feelings down on paper..which is cool.Its good to let thing out and share at the same time. Thank you for practicing the principal of sharing is caring:) |