Suicide Note

by Emma   Apr 11, 2006


Dear all,

I've seem to hit a wall
I'm trapped in this life
With nothing but a knife
Wondering if it is worth it to stay
When everyone i love sees to stray
Falling away from me
This wouldn't have to be
If you would have cared
Instead of feared
Me, because it's almost too late
I've already cut the vain
Way to deep, no more pain
Blood begins to fall
My wall
comes crashing down
I'm no longer bound
It's Dark as night
But no moon light
I've ended this
With my wrist
You no longer have to worry
Just be sure to carry
Me away...

Gone Today
Forever I'll be true
Pain of you

**My name and my email is pain of you...I don't know about this a weird style of writing...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    That was a weird style indeed, but it worked so well with the poem. Really emotional stuff. I think you should change the title to Pain of You.
    Or you could leave it, it works both ways. Good stuff

  • 18 years ago

    by hezha murad

    WOW, GREAT POEM...YOUR EMOTIONS REALLY SHOWED..GOOD JOB GIRL..

    LOVE HEZHA

  • 18 years ago

    by zoe

    Theres alot of feeling here, but have to agree with the comments before, maybe a little more explination on the 'why'
    nice work
    zoe xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I like this one, but since it's a suicide note...I think you should say more, because these are your "last words".
    I liked the descriptions, and the rhymes. Keep writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow.. this was great.. I loved it.. i thought it showed great emotion.. great job 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

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