Do you ever feel down and low? and your feelings, they just dont show?
you want so bad for someone to see how youve been hurt in this past of thee.
But they dont care, not even your \"friends\" but then you say to yourself \"something good will happen in the end.\"
You wait and wait for all to be good but in the end its never good,
You just want to be understood. but all that will eve happen is nothing but fears and many more tears.
Soon youll give up this \"simple\" thing called \"life\" youll stop the cutting with the knife.
Noone will never understand the feelings that you have, but thats just what you think and feel, you dont know about my past.
I was a cutter like you, i didnt care about anybody or what they was to do.
So now I\'m going to rest lie you, end my life over a f u c ked up dude.
so dont even say you know how i feel really you have no f u c k ing clue of the shit i go threw.
( this one doesnt ryhm the whole way threw but i tried ) I\'m not that good at writting poems. ( as you can tell! lol )
Actually this poem wasn't that bad, a few words could have been changed out, but the overall effect has a nice feel to it. Keep it up and I know you'll improve.
-Blacksand