Wow! that was so sweet......
but i can feel the pain too.
good work Sarah!

much luv,
Bharti

That is the best poem in the world it was so sweet and thanx so much for all your wonderful comments

This is certainly the best poem i hv come across so far, so simple and so sad, damn deep poem indeed.

all the best and take care
5/5

Except for the slightly off rhyming in the first two lines - the flow was great and the poem was really easy to read.

Peace. [Sole]

It is amazing you arean amazing poet keep up the good work and keep writting