This is awesome stuff courtney, it's really complex and though I don't understand it all I can see there is much meaning hidden in here. I also think that cause it's short you've packed a whole heap into it, this is very effective because it really makes you think as all your ideas are thrown out. Nice poem :)

I like how short it was yet you were able to convey your meaning into it. It had an impact on me with how strongly you worded it. Nicely done! ^_^

~Sarah~

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