by PS Apr 11, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Hidden from the cruel common treachery |
by xxmichaelxx
Awesome poem! keep it up! |
by Esther
I liked!! it was simple! not complecated, no depth!! it was very good! 5/5!! |
by Sondos
Very eerie, should maybe be in the dark section, well rhymed |
by Biscuit
The adjectives and rhymes make this seem almost magical :) |
by fallen angel
That was beautifully written. You are a good writter and I have enjoyed all of your work so far. I cant wait until you write some more. |