Beautifully done! A truly amazing write :)

That was beautifully written. You are a good writter and I have enjoyed all of your work so far. I cant wait until you write some more.

The adjectives and rhymes make this seem almost magical :)

Very eerie, should maybe be in the dark section, well rhymed

Sondos

I liked!! it was simple! not complecated, no depth!! it was very good! 5/5!!

Awesome poem! keep it up!