I loved it...great job....I am speachless....that is all....wow....
Emma 5/5

I liked the way this one was written and set out. the blood and family was ingenious.

I liked this, But.. It just feels like theres something missing, Maybe its just me, I dunno. But it was really good. My Fav lines are;
"holds my inadequacies
that whatever i do
will never be enough
to become what i
can be; should be
but i don't want to"

I loved that part. Keep it up =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x

The descriptions are unusual and original, but strangely confusing.

It's a bit confusing and the fact that it's stuffed together doesn't make much lines stand out. It does feel like something was missing. Was it good? Of course it was. Maybe if you'd gone a bit in depth it would stand out more. The title was okay but seemed just that when you could have the potential to make your poems truley amazing.