Very deep and descriptive. I loved it, it was very true and powerful. Awesome poem!

Hmm.. This is sad =[ You did a good job though! Liked it alot.

`taleee xx

Great Job! I thought it was sad =( but I liked it you are awesome at writing.=)

Holy shit thats amazing. seriously amazing. its simplicity alludes emptiness, your diction creates a powerful depressing tone, and its just... perfect.

This poem is a strong expression of emotions
i can understand the reasoning behind the poem.

**smile**