This is a very interesting style Ms. Holly, beautifully written as always, Love, Tim

I'm trying to write one of these right now and they are a lot harder than they sound. the discription of them sounds really easy. great job with it though! intresting words as well.

~Jacklyn

This is awesome, Holly! Love this style, very interesting.. Fantastic choice of words and the flow was flawless... Great job! :)

Holly, you are truly an amazing poetess. this one is remarkable.

shobhana

Beautifully done. great style and skill.
wonderful.

Very good poem....although you did you purposly put seven syllables in the first sentence?...cause you say that it has six in each sentence but your first one has seven...just wanted to tell you that and that it was really good.

Wow, that poem is really good and great choice of style, god bless * xxxx

This is amzing . Im glad you speak ur feelings reall well good job. A thumbs up

This is amzing . Im glad you speak ur feelings reall well good job. A thumbs up