by Elmo Apr 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
With her head cocked and a gleam in her eyes "mom don't ask why" With a whimsical smile worm and kind"really, mom i am fine" So sudden the action was taken now we are apart but, mom I'll always be in your hart the melody soars when a song in sung"Remember my journey has just begun." The colors of rays in a down of a new day. "Mom he will help you all the way" With a bounce in her step along the way" Mom just think you'll be with me one day." |
Try separating ur sentances into poetry form..for most it would make it easier and more interestn to read. I liek this though...keep ti up. |
Anothr gub poem by u...YAY!!!!!!!! |