Another Friend

by Jacqui Armstrong   Apr 11, 2006


Another friend
To be close to
There till the end
Just me and you
Someone else who
You can fall for
Someone else to
Keep the score

Another friend
To be close to
A heart to mend
A friend to true
Someone else for
You to fall for
Someone else to
Try to stay true

Falling in love
Will break your heart
Falling in love
Its not that smart
Just a new friend
So much can go wrong
There till the end
Try to stay strong

Don't fall in love
Just be good friends
Don't fall in love
Stick till the end.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Please tell me how that works...NOT falling in love with a friend. As you grow closer, love grows too. It isn't untill you've lost him, you realize what you had before you were stupid enough to cross the line!

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Beautiful poem.
    The emotions/thoughts are just great.
    Keep on writing on what you feel and like

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    This poem has an overused RS that makes it seem quick and jittery. Its good, but I would add length to the last stanza to even it out. {5/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. what a sweet poem! it has lots of emotion, flows well, and uses good descriptions! nice write! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Sweet although not all that different. I found the rhymes predictable and the subject quite unoriginal. However, it flowed well and was quite a touching write. Thanks for sharing.

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