There are a couple of flow problems. personally i would like it if the lines were longer. like two lines were just on one. but thats just me. i love the last stanza. nice.

Very powerfully written, didn't always flow perfectly but the content more than made up for this minor structual fault

This was great. Giving out some pretty good advice, tight rhyme scheme. Just a little query...

"A friend to true
Someone else for" here did you mean too instead of true.
Apart fromt that tis amazing.

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Sweet although not all that different. I found the rhymes predictable and the subject quite unoriginal. However, it flowed well and was quite a touching write. Thanks for sharing.

Aww.. what a sweet poem! it has lots of emotion, flows well, and uses good descriptions! nice write! 5/5

This poem has an overused RS that makes it seem quick and jittery. Its good, but I would add length to the last stanza to even it out. {5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Beautiful poem.
The emotions/thoughts are just great.
Keep on writing on what you feel and like

God Bless!

Please tell me how that works...NOT falling in love with a friend. As you grow closer, love grows too. It isn't untill you've lost him, you realize what you had before you were stupid enough to cross the line!