Love like this

by PS   Apr 11, 2006


Love like this can never be found
not in the heavens nor in the ground
we are together forever bound
of complaint there is never a sound

when im upset you hold me tight
or otherwise in the middle of the deep night
and if there is a biting harsh fight
we work through it without creating a sight

when we hold each other i hear the bells ring
and on the boughs of our love the fairies swing
of loving i am the master, you the king
of our love the pure gaurdian angels sing

so alone you must never ever leave me
together with you i can always easily see
all the good in the world and shining key
to neverending life and all of immortal eternity

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    When i read this poem, i loved it, it made so much sense and is well written.
    You came 3rd in the contest you wrote it for, well done
    Tara-Kay

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    When we hold each other i hear the bells ring
    and on the boughs of our love the fairies swing

    love those lines....and i can identify with this entire poem. love is really a magical thing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    I loved the true essence of love that this poem holds... very well written.. it makes the readers fall in love one more time...
    Keep writing..
    5/5

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw that is such a beautiful poem! it really expresses your thoughts & feelings well. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I'd suggest capitalizing the i's but other than that forget the votes. I'll vote anyway. I liked the title but it didn't seem strong enough for the poem. The poem was beautiful and slightly powerful. Definately emoional that the title just seems dulled down.

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