by Fallen~Tears
I thought it was really good not my favorite of yours the first stanza is my fav.. keep it up 5/5 |
by Simon Hayes
This is a wonderful poem!! Don't even sweat the votes. People gutless to vote and not comment aren't worth even acknowledging. You've written a loving piece, written from the heart. An enjojyable read. |
by Carmen
Utterly amazing... how could this only have a 4? that bull****. anyways, this poem is amazing and wonderful |
by Kaylee
I'd suggest capitalizing the i's but other than that forget the votes. I'll vote anyway. I liked the title but it didn't seem strong enough for the poem. The poem was beautiful and slightly powerful. Definately emoional that the title just seems dulled down. |
by Bridgette
Aw that is such a beautiful poem! it really expresses your thoughts & feelings well. great job! |
I loved the true essence of love that this poem holds... very well written.. it makes the readers fall in love one more time... |
by Tripp
When we hold each other i hear the bells ring |
by Tara Kay
When i read this poem, i loved it, it made so much sense and is well written. |